Hybrid, a Supernatural story | SparkaTale



By: RT 13

Status: Completed


When a drug problem is getting out of hand and a long written Prophecy is being brought up because of the appearance of a human boy, what has one one-winged, orphaned hybrid outcast got to do with anything?

Created: August 17, 2013 | Updated: September 25, 2013

Genre : Supernatural

Language : English

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Comments: 4

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1: Prologue 88
2: Chapter I 5209
3: Chapter II 2261
4: Chapter III 3397
5: Chapter IV 1794
6: Chapter V 1227
7: Chapter VI 1567
8: Chapter VII 5428
9: Chapter VIII 2945
10: Chapter IX 1859
11: Chapter X 3453
12: Chapter XI 2383
13: Chapter XII 7731
14: Chapter XIII 4275
15: Chapter XIV 2771
16: Chapter XV 1552
17: Chapter XVI 5392
18: Epilogue 1191
Total Wordcount: 54523

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      This prologue is perfect! For being so short it really got me excited to read more. Here's hoping the rest is as good.

      September 2, 2013 | D.M. Gergen

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      Thank you! I was originally worried it was too short, but it fulfilled its purpose. Hopefully you enjoy the rest.

      September 2, 2013 | RT 13

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      Just finished chapter one. This very very original and very entertaining. The only suggestions I would have is maybe editing the bit where Nyx explains shades (it was a bit long and wordy) and then do the same about her being a hybrid. I think the amount of information you gave was good, but maybe try to make it more concise? That is if you ever are going to repost this somewhere else or publish. Otherwise I love the details you provided. I could picture the room, the characters, and the overall flow of the world. Nice work.

      September 2, 2013 | D.M. Gergen

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      I'll keep that in mind if I go back and edit this. I agree that it ended up being rather wordy and I need to work on being concise, among other things, but I'm glad that you still enjoyed the chapter.
      Thank you for the comments!

      September 3, 2013 | RT 13