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New Story, New Plot. Problem? Finding the glue to stick it all together.

I've finally managed to collect the nerve to send out my own story. In my opinion it needs tweaking, but where I am not exactly sure. Can someone give me some helpful tips? Even better, a critique on my story would be nice. THANK YOU!!!

by Hwang Dong Kyu | Oct 1st 2014, 09:41


  • hi there, i would be happy to leave a comment on your story if that is what you want.. :) would you mind taking a look at mine, Marked Book 1: A Darker Power in return?

     

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    Gracie Rose | January 29, 2015


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