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Aaron L.



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  • Joined 04/26/16
  • Last login 04/19/24
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Alrighty, then... I'm not very good at introductions, but I'll give it my best since my OCD will torture me to death unless I do. 

I like waffles. With syrup. And maybe a bit of honey.

Sunlight and pain are my enemies.

Bye now.

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  • Blood Trail

    Rating:
    This is a genuinely incredible story with beautiful grammar, an engaging and very heart-wrenching plot, and a relatable character. It is super intense: I loved reading every bit of it. To anyone who reads this review, check this story out! It's awesome!

    Reviewed on: April 29, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    Rating:
    This story.... there are NO WORDS for how good it is! It is literal BRAIN CANDY! Beautifully written, no noticeable mistakes, and wonderful timing! Not ONLY that, the plot is engaging and characters are the kind that grow on you. As in, grow REALLY fast. Five stars.

    Reviewed on: April 28, 2016

  • Gifted

    Rating:
    This is an amazing read. I was hooked from the very first chapter! Five stars!

    Reviewed on: April 28, 2016

  • Spirit of the Forest

    Rating:
    This story is genuinely incredible. There were a few typical mistakes in the grammar here and there, but aside from that, it was beautifully written and I genuinely can't stop reading it. I highly recommend to those who see this review to give this a read, since I'm now eagerly waiting on future updates. And to those of you who don't know... I'm a VERY picky reader.

    Reviewed on: April 27, 2016

Comments

  • Blood Trail

    This story is literally amazing. I am genuinely waiting for the next update! PLEAAAASE! So many of the great stories have cut off like, last year! It drives me nuts! Please don't discontinue this.

    Commented on: April 29, 2016

  • Blood Trail

    This is a very intriguing opening. I'm genuinely looking forward to reading this!

    Commented on: April 29, 2016

  • Because I love you

    I'm afraid I'm rather confused about what you mean by making the emotions sharper around the edgers... would you mind giving an example? I'm a little slow to grasp things like that. 

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Spirit of the Forest

    Don't worry too much, kk? There really aren't that many, and it didn't affect the quality of your story. In fact, if you want to see terrible writing, check mine out. XD It's chock full of crap. No lie.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Spirit of the Forest

    I'm not too sure about that. I myself am planning on entering my own story into the 2016 Watty Awards, but I'm clueless about publishing.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    You're very, very welcome! My own story so far kinda... pales in comparison. You write way better than I do. You should enter this into the 2016 Watty Award Competition once it starts. I'm entering my own in despite my worries, but you might actually have a shot at winning with such a great read.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Spirit of the Forest

    Aside from that, your writing is genuinely flawless. 

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Spirit of the Forest

    There are only a few simple mistakes that are very spaced out, really: I do it from time to time, as well. For example, in chapter 4, you used caps for individual letters twice in the middle of a sentence, and in chapter 8, you accidentally used except instead of accept. .  

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    Noooooooo! It can't be done!! Update soon... I crave more brain candy!

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    Your grammar is beautiful, your timing is perfect, and your descriptions literally paint an image inside my head. I aspire to write this well.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    Ughgghghghg,---- my heartstrings, being tugged. This is the kind of story I would literally buy at Barnes and Nobles, grab a cup of coffee, and then binge read in my pajamas while listening to music. It is a CRYING shame this hasn't been published.

    I would buy it.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    I've got genuine goosebumps. This is a damn good read... 

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Smoke and Mirrors

    Um... okay, I'm actually in genuine shock. How the hell do you not have more reads, let alone no comments at all? This is one of those stories that can catch people hook, line, and sinker! It's appalling that it hadn't had any reviews or comments until now! 

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Traveler

    Eagerly awaiting an update.

     

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Traveler

    Ooh.... cliffy! I want to read more, sooo... onto the next chapter.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Legends

    I'm actually kind of mad how quickly I burn through stories. -_-

    I hope you update sometime soon. I know it's not likely since you've left it alone for two years now, according to the date, but here's hoping.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Legends

    Okay, three things about this chapter: One, it was incredibly well written, and I absolutely ADORE wolves, so I know for a fact I'm going to love this story. Two, your layout with the text was easy to read, for which I thank you: I can read giant blocks of text all at once, but singular one-liner sentences slow me down, so thank you for the pristine grammar. And third, I'm going to be binge reading because this.

    Another fav.

     

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • The Enchantress and the Rayvene

    Oh, maannn..... you really, REALLY need to finish this. I'm shocked that it doesn't have more views and comments than it already does: these are the kinds of stories that go viral on wattpad. 

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Unwanted

    Gahhh... I'm already craving more! You have to finish this! It's too good!

     

    Great job.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Unwanted

    Oh dear.... that's not good. The concept of witch burnings makes my skin crawl. Onto the next chappie! 

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Unwanted

    This is a lovely and intriguing opening. I'm actually rather jealous of how beautiful your grammar is, and the way you word things is pretty damn good, too. 

     

    I'm looking forward to reading the rest of your stories. Let me know which ones you would recommend: I signed up for Sparkatale since Wattpad is becoming more of a Fanfiction show than an original story one. And since fictionpress is full of people who either don't capture my interest with their stores OR read my own work... welp.

    Here I am.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Gifted

    Wow... damn, I just read this whole story.I am genuinely in love with it.

    Commented on: April 28, 2016

  • Spirit of the Forest

    Yeppers... I'm gonna be binge reading this. I can already tell that this is going to be a damn good story! Great Prologue: you managed to snare me with it.

    Commented on: April 27, 2016

  • Dead Men Tell No Tales - Norrington's Return

    Great first chapter! Looking forward to future updates! 

    Commented on: April 27, 2016

  • Devil Knight

    Yep... this has definitely gotten me hooked. Great first chapter: snared me hook, line, and sinker! Onto the next chapter! 

    Commented on: April 27, 2016

  • Because I love you

    I went back and fixed that. It was a copy paste mishap from word, lol. No need to worry, since I too find it irritating to look at a bunch of one-liners on stories. I'm not that type of writer.

    Commented on: April 27, 2016